One boy. One vampire. One werewolf. One demon.
One love.
One destiny.
Vampire and demon
Erstellt: 18.09.2008
Letzte Änderung: 03.12.2008
Letzte Änderung: 03.12.2008
nicht abgeschlossen (25%)
Englisch
7072 Wörter, 4 Kapitel
7072 Wörter, 4 Kapitel
Kapitel | Datum | Andere Formate | Daten |
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~komplette Fanfic~ | V: 18.09.2008 U: 03.12.2008 |
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Destination | E: 18.09.2008 U: 18.09.2008 |
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Chapter One ~ Stranger | E: 18.09.2008 U: 18.09.2008 |
Kommentare (1) 3589 Wörter abgeschlossen |
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Arms of hope | E: 03.12.2008 U: 03.12.2008 |
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Facing the enemy | E: 03.12.2008 U: 03.12.2008 |
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Hisashi
Real Name: Dschamal (Arabian = Beauty)
Birthdate: unknown
Birthplace: Israel
High: 166cm
Master: Nahema
Best ability: Adroitness
Worst abilty: Scent
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Jiro
Real Name: Jeaun
Birthdate: 17.10.1936
Birthplace: Lion
Master: Takuro
High: 181cm
Best ability: persuasive power
Worst ability: patience
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Nahema
Real Name: Nahema (egyptian = the chosen one)
Birthdate: unknown (sth. around 2600 bc)
Birthplace: Egypt
High: 146cm
Master: unknown
Best ability: Smartness
Worst ability: Egoism
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Takuro
Real name: Sir Timeus
Birthdate: 26.05.1428
Birthplace: Ireland
High: 192cm
Master: Manouk
Best ability: Strength
Worst ability: Composure
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Teruhiko
Real Name: Thomas
Birthdate: 12.09.1886
Birthplace: London
High: 172cm
Master: Hisashi
Best ability: Scent
Worst ability: Speed
The story is good. Normaly I don't like the first-person narrator, but in this case I make an exception.
I'm interesst in the first meeting of jiro and takuro and the first appearance of teruhiko.
I hope you write more.
Regards,
Side
I'm interesst in the first meeting of jiro and takuro and the first appearance of teruhiko.
I hope you write more.
Regards,
Side
Kommentar zu: Chapter One ~ Stranger